Uh-oh, something doesn’t add up here.

I’ve begun adding the original script to the bottom of each page. This is the text I started with before drawing the page, so it won’t always match the finished comic. Hopefully I’ll remember to remove any major spoiler notes-to-self.


Original Script

Cut to: Jane is sleeping peacefully in her bed. 
Mom slams open her bedroom door.

MOM
Jane Webb! 
Explain yourself at once!

JANE
Half asleep and confused.
Huh?

MOM
How dare you treat Annabelle like that!

JANE
Still confused, shocked, and worried.
What?! I never…

MOM
Your behavior this morning…
Disgraceful!
Trudge down and apologize before she gives her notice.

JANE
B-But… I’ve been in bed all night. 
I haven’t spoken to Annabelle since dinner.