Poor Jane. Stay tuned for the new adventures of “Dirty Harriet: Fowl Retribution” as the little bird stalks the city seeking revenge and protecting the innocent.

Seriously though, these last few pages with the cops went through so many revisions. Originally both officers were men, and there was a lot more bullying and nastiness. I think this version works, and I love how the old lady turned out.

Only a miracle (or a curse) can save Jane now. Tune in on Thursday to see what happens next!

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Original Script

Jane collapses on the ground.
Guard 1 looks frightened of his own actions.

GUARD 2
Both looking down at the camera.
Aw, why’d you do that? 

GUARD 1
The scabby thing attempted to grope me! 
Who knows what sickness it carried?

GUARD 2
As they walk away
It’s probably better off anyway. 

GUARD 1
And, one less mouth to feed.

GUARD 2
You solved the food shortage!

Later, a few people gather around Jane’s body.